Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Ode to diary

Diary
Dear diary,

  Diary the name of the terrible horror. When I come back to dorm, you give me horrifying work to do. You have taken my liberty. When I get back to the dorm, you are waiting for me with your terrifying face. And your horror slowly comes toward me. If I avoid you several times, you come to me with three or four times of horror.

 When you`re gone, my heart is so light. I even think I can fly. It is a paradise, a heaven, nothing can be better than this, but I`m also worried about your return.


A stair way to paradise



 I`m worried about the horror after your return. When you come back to me, the sky darkens and the clouds come into my mind. You tear my heart with your words and drives me crazy with the things inside of you. You always tease me with your face and stab my heart with tour tongue. You make me move my pen and make me use my brain.

Horror in my mind
 You are always a poison to me, you slowly make me mad, and slowly kill me. I hate you because you always make me annoyed. You steal so much of my time. Your touch is too tough and your skin is so rough. You are my mental breaker. You messed up my brain and you make me become impoverished. Please leave me now. Don't irritate me anymore.

Annoying Orange
Yours,
Jin seop.












3 comments:

  1. Jinseob,
    This is a good ode. You are good with descriptive language. Try also to use personifications to make the ode sound more poetic.

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  2. Hi!
    You wrote a nice ode to your diary. It seems that you really don't like writing diaries. Good job in using descriptive language in your ode. Keep working hard~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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  3. Funny as I've expected. But is the diary that horrible? I didn't know that. Anyway, I really like it!!!

    J

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